“Eyetracking visualizations show that users often read web pages in an F-shaped pattern: two horizontal stripes followed by a vertical stripe. F for fast. That’s how users read your content. In a few seconds, their eyes move at amazing speeds across your website’s words in a pattern that’s very different from what you learned in school.” (Nielsen, par. 1-2)

How to Make Your Web Pages More “Scannable:”

• Highlight keywords
• Use meaningful sub-heads
• Use bulleted lists
• Keep paragraphs to one idea
• Write in an inverted pyramid style
• Keep your word count down, use about half the word count that you would use for print

Don’t Lose Your Audience
Users will most likely visit multiple web sites in one sitting. Don’t lose your user’s interest by burying information in content-heavy pages. Try to provide useful information in a quick and visual way rather than through long text explanations. If you don’t, the user will more than likely leave your site to view a competitor.

Be Concise
Web writing should be concise. Don’t worry about transitions. Web users don’t look for a smooth, essay-like structure.

If You Have Further Information
If the topic has a lot of content, offer the most useful information on the landing page, and link to additional content for users who want more information. This will help retain users who just want a taste of information, but still satisfy users who are looking for in-depth information.

Is My Web Site Content Heavy?
One of the easiest ways to determine if a particular page is too content heavy is to look at the bounce rate and/or conversions. A page that has multiple paragraphs of text with no visual cues (bullet lists, sub-heads, highlighted keywords, etc.) and a high bounce rate and/or low conversions may indicate it is too content heavy. Conduct a simple A/B test with your original version and a new version with the content reduced, and see if you get better results.

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Contact Lever Interactive for web site optimization services. We can help identify problem pages, make recommendations and conduct testing.

Nielsen, Jakob. Jakob Nielsen on Usability and Web Design. F-Shaped Pattern for Reading Web Content. Nielson Norman Group. 17 April 2006

Here are some tips to writing good product descriptions:

• Use Specifics
  Descriptive words like “large” and “roomy” mean different things to different people. While you don’t want to exclude them, provide measurements to back up the statement.
• Limit Superlatives
  Web users detest “marketese.” Unless you can back up the statement in some manner, try to limit the use of superlatives like “Best Product,” “Hottest Ever,” etc. Instead offer a list of features allowing the user to determine on their own if it is the “Best Product.” Remember, web users are busy; they want the straight facts. Also, credibility suffers when users clearly see the site exaggerates.
• Provide Tips or Usage Examples
  Give real-world examples and tips on using a product, particularly if it is new, or has multiple uses.
• Don’t be too Fancy
  If the item comes in pink, light green and blue, use those common color terms instead of bubble gum, seafoam and indigo. If the manufacturer has offered the products with unusual color names, be sure to give the common color terms alongside the manufacturer’s color name.
• Keep it Short
  You are competing with millions of other web sites, busy schedules, and the shorter attention span of most potential customers. Keep it simple. Keep it short. Use headlines and bullet lists to help the user scan the text, so they can find their most important reason for buying the product.

If your product descriptions need some work, concentrate on your top 10-20 products first. Make some changes, and test to see if they make a difference. Keep changing and testing until you find the right combination and apply those changes to your remaining inventory.

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